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From a video production standpoint: Holy, Blair Witch...editing would be good, I think. Set the scene, the mood and then spare your viewer the life of a sniper. Action was fine. Consider the length of interest of a viewer who wasn't there and doesn't know the players. Text could have been on screen a bit longer.
From a game play standpoint: Control your breathing. Not sure about leaving your sniper rifle behind as you went to knife. I'm not saying that was for sure bad, just question if it is wise. Did you have a sidearm? Was your radio audible without headphones? Probably not so good if that's the case. An ill-timed communication during your sneak-up would have meant the end of that.
All in all a reasonable effort. Congrats!
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